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How I Write A Script, Part 10: Editing

Here is the last in a series of 10 posts about how I approach writing a script. Previous posts:

Part 1: Story Concept

Part 2: Brainstorming

Part 3: Research

Part 4: Character Development

Part 5: Plotting

Part 6: Outline

Part 7: Script Diary

Part 8: First Draft

Part 9: Rewriting

PART 10: Editing

This is the most fun part of the process. I just love printing out a fresh copy of the script, plunked down in my reading chair, Pentel Rolling Writer pen in hand, and just sitting with my story. I mark that draft up but good – page after page after page. I’ve developed my own code system:

AW = “Another word”

AL = “Another line”

BV = “Better verb”

OTT = “Over The Top”

OTN = “On The Nose”

SSS = “Some stupid shit”

There’s also description and dialogue with big X’s through them – as in “cut this out”. I’ll have lines running from one page to the next, telling me to move this scene in front of that one. I’ll have all sorts of notes in the margins about transitions, visual images, and such.

So I go back through the script and make the changes. And I do this same process over and over, each time refining the draft.

As it gets closer to being finished, I get real picky. For instance, I’ll highlight each verb and come up with better, more active verbs. I’ll print out every side of dialogue for each character, then read them back to back to make sure I’m nailing their voice. And I’m constantly cutting description, cutting dialogue. I can get very anal about this as I really want each page to look beautiful, easy on the eyes, a clean read.

And then, one final print-out, where I read the script through aloud. Every word. It’s amazing how hearing your words can expose them in a wholly fresh way. As I read, I write changes on the hard copy of the script. Then it’s one last edit. Save. Print.

The final thing I do is a silly ritual. I stand by the printer as it spits out the pages of my script. Once it’s done printing, I immediately pick up the pages. I feel the warmth of the paper, fresh from the printer. I weigh the heft of the pages in my hands. Then I smell it. That’s right, I smell the script. I have smelled many things in my life, but there is perhaps nothing more satisfying than breathing deep the aroma of a finished script.

And that’s how I write a script.

UPDATE: I’m getting a lot of positive feedback on this series. Makes me think I should expand it into an eBook. The reason I did the posts in the first place was because I hadn’t seen anything with an actual script-writing process. And I have a ton of tips, tools and techniques for each of these 10 steps in the process. So just checking to see if you think people would be interested to have that as a resource.

7 thoughts on “How I Write A Script, Part 10: Editing

  1. Scott,

    I enjoyed this. It is both fun and focusing to explore another’s process. Speaking for or at least as a new writer/scriptwriter – I say go for it and flesh out these 10 posts into a short eBook. It will be a resource to some and a great hook to hotlink to on GITS.

    Thanks and cheers,

    Wes…

  2. I think it’s an excellent idea, Scott.

    I believe such a book would compliment to the blog well and perhaps could also be used to raise awareness of the screen writing master classes.

    Also, although it wouldn’t need it, perhaps a forward from Franklin Leonard would be a nice touch.

  3. This series has been incredibly useful to me, as I just started writing about a year ago and just finished a fourth script. It has validated many of the habits I’ve picked up along the way, and given me plenty of new strategies to use. Can’t thank you enough. DEFINITELY would be interested in a book of this.

  4. I absolutely think it should be an ebook. I’ve purchased several great blog series ebooks from authors and screenwriters. One one level, it’s fantastic having them in ebook form so I can just pull them up on my kindle, but also it’s a way I can give back to the work they’ve put into their blogs. And I’ve never felt I was paying too much either, most of them are between $2 & $5 depending on the length.

    I would absolutely feel the same way about an ebook you put out…especially this one which is quite helpful as well. You also have several series that I’ve bookmarked and refer to..so again with the convenience factor.. Really this is all just about making my life easier :)

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