Reflections of Black List Los Angeles Mini-Lab Writers

December 4th, 2015 by

On the weekend of November 20-22, four writers gathered in Hollywood for an exciting event: The fifth Black List Mini-Lab. The writers — Corey Bodoh-Creed, Chloe Hung, Sabrina Siebert, and Mary Unser — had been selected on the basis of scripts they had uploaded to the Black List website and a personal statement about the story they were writing and their creative aspirations.

Over the weekend, they hung out with the Black List team including Franklin Leonard and met one on one with mentors Jessica Bendinger, Tonia Davis, Eric Heisserer, and Kelly Marcel to discuss their scripts, then participated in two workshop sessions with me as group leader. They also attended the Black List Live! stage reading of “El Fuego Caliente” at The Montalban Theater, written and directed by Ben Schwartz and featuring a cast of terrific guest actors including Don Cheadle as well as the after party.

Here are some reflections about their individual and collective experience from the weekend they spent together. Their observations are both illuminating and inspiring.

Corey Bodoh-Creed

I can’t thank Franklin, Scott, Megan, Kate, and Terry from the Black List enough for including me and my screenplay, “Reckless Hearts,” in the Los Angeles Mini-Lab.  It’s hard to describe the entire experience succinctly.  Comparing it to a tornado that snatches you and your house and all of your cows up in a chaotic wind, only to gently set everything back down again a few hours later with your livestock thoughtfully rearranged in some kind of feng shui harmony seems like the only appropriate analogy.

The opportunity to meet and brainstorm with our mentors was so amazing.  These are people who really know how to craft compelling narrative and rich characters, and the chance to really refine things with such experienced craftspeople was so valuable.  Each mentor had some distinct micro-notes, but the real difference here from your average writers’ group were the larger macro-notes.  In one way or another, I heard essentially the same thing from each of the mentors — which basically all boiled down to, “Where is the heart of this story and what do your characters want/need?” — and over the course of a few hours with each of them, we were able to find some tangible, actionable ways to refine that core essence of my script so that it will truly sing.  I was also able to run some other story ideas past them and Franklin, which was invigorating and incredibly useful in calibrating my creative compass.

On the last day of the Lab, our meta-mentor, Scott Myers, gathered the other Lab fellows and I together to really hash out the tidal wave of notes we’d received from the mentors.  I can’t tell you how grateful I am to have gotten to know and work with Chloe, Sabrina, and Mary.  These are some of the smartest and most creative people that I have ever met, and it was astounding how much they genuinely wanted to help me refine my work.  They approached it as if they had written the script themselves and I now have a very clear plan going forward with my project.

We were also really fortunate to have the Black List Live! featuring Ben Schwartz’s El Fuego Caliente mixed in with our mentor sessions (if Paramount doesn’t produce this script, then they’re a bunch of damn fools, I tell you!).  We were introduced around as fellows of the Lab, which was an incredibly validating feeling.  To have a prestigious group say, “Hey, kid.  Out of a thousand entries, we picked you.  You’re with us now,” well, it just adds a little juice to your creative battery.

I really can’t express how appreciative I am to have had this experience.  My scripts have done well in a bunch of different competitions, but nothing has provided the same jolt as the Black List Mini-Labs.  Basically, it was a totally bad-ass way to spend a long weekend.

Bodoh-Creed Corey

Corey Bodoh-Creed

Chloe Hung

The Black List’s mini-lab was an incredibly helpful, humbling, and encouraging experience.

We first had a great session, the four of us, with Scott Myers. Scott had us answer some questions about our own work in preparation for our one-on-one meetings. These questions (including what inspired us, what are the strengths of the screenplay, the weaknesses) helped give me a framework for what I felt I needed to work on. It would help to then see what was similar or different in how others perceived the areas I wanted to work on.

My mentor meetings in order were: Kelly Marcel, Tonia Davis, Jessica Bendinger, and Eric Heisserer. Each mentor focused on a different topic of discussion, building on the previous. Kelly, being the first, spent the most time on story goals and story logic. Tonia, being the only non-writer of the four mentors, spoke most about the protagonist and what resonated with her and what didn’t; she helped me craft the steady progression of the character’s emotional arc. Jessica, then, focused on developing the supporting characters and the details of the world I was writing in. Eric, being the last mentor, helped me parse through the others’ feedback and added his own suggestions and variations on certain themes and characters.

Each mentor gave specific and insightful feedback. I was struck by the level of detail and care through which they all spoke about my screenplay. They wanted to help and they certainly were a great one at that!

We ended the lab with a group workshop led by Scott. Together we sifted through the feedback we had been given and then added feedback for each other. Scott took us through some writing techniques, strategies, and theories. I found his notes illuminating and helpful in clarifying questions I had about all the feedback I was given over the course of two days. I valued the opinions of my lab-mates immensely. They threw in many suggestions that built on the feedback from the mentors. It’s a lot of feedback so it was very helpful to have the opportunity to unpack it with Scott and my lab-mates. It was a safe space for us to explore all these new ideas.

I am so grateful to Franklin Leonard, Megan Halpert, Kate Hagen, and Terry Huang for bringing me into the Black List family and making me feel welcome. They were all so kind and organized a great weekend for us. We got to see a live read of Ben Schwartz’s screenplay El Fuego Caliente, which was hilarious and thrilling.

I came into this experience with a fresh screenplay. It was the first draft and I knew it needed work so I was thrilled to get the chance to have so much feedback. Eric advised me to step back for a little while and digest before going back to rewrites. He told me to see what thoughts and ideas stick and go from there. As a writer, the lab gave me the opportunity to get several reactions to a story. I was able to see what worked and what didn’t. I learned a lot about what makes a screenplay work as both a potential film and as a piece of writing. I am so grateful for this experience and I am excited to get back to writing.

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Chloe Hung

Sabrina Siebert

Thank you for giving us an opportunity to give our thoughts about this past week’s mini-lab in your blog. My part will be brief, but that’s only because I’m on a roll with my rewrites and can’t concentrate on much else, so please take that as a testament to the success of the lab.

To the Blacklist crew and mentors; I, or rather we (because I think the others would agree), owe you a huge debt of gratitude. You gave so generously of your time, wisdom, friendship, and ongoing support – not to mention rolling out the red carpet food and drink-wise…and you did it all for four complete strangers who have nothing to offer you in return.

Now I believe in selflessness, but only in certain insects, so I kept thinking, these labs must exist because you all stand to gain something in the end.  And it’s true; in a perfect world we, the recipients of your generosity, feel so compelled to make you proud of us that we work twice as hard, take all the advantages you’ve offered, do whatever it takes to become a success…then on the day we all win our Golden Globes we’ll tweet #oweitalltoblklst and get our four grillion followers to donate to the website.

You guys stand to do very well in that scenario.  But in reality, if it’s funding and free publicity you want, I think we all know there’s a million better ways to get it than relying on an LA writer to rise from obscurity.

That leads me to believe what you guys get out of this is something less tangible, like knowing that you fostered talent…encouraged art…provided guidance to those of us lost within a bewildering and inhospitable industry.

There is always the hope that someone you discover will be the next big thing – why not, that’s thrilling. But I came out of the weekend with the impression that I had been among true teachers, people who took genuine pleasure in seeing their influence mold better writers, if not create superstars. It’s not an entirely selfless motive for these labs, but it’s a noble one. It was certainly invaluable to me.

Thanks again to all of you, with all my heart.

Siebert Sabina

Sabrina Siebert

Mary Unser

The Los Angeles Blacklist mini-lab weekend allowed me to learn more about my script and meet new colleagues in an easy-going, supportive atmosphere — which is precisely what I was hoping for.

Franklin, Megan, Kate & Terry, each more brainy, funny and driven than the next, answered all questions, texts and calls for berry crumble with grace, wit and an avalanche of information (and opinions) about the film and television.

Scott Myers set an easy, respectful tone for the writers that allowed us to be open and honest, focused and purposeful.  It was clear everyone spent time with each script and was offering their best.  My only suggestion would be to lengthen the final session (or add one more) so the writers can ask as many questions as necessary.

The mentors — all targeting different aspects of my script — had nothing but astute, careful criticism.  It was a pleasure to meet each one and hear about their journeys as well as how they approach their work.

I left the weekend pondering all the input in a very positive way — not in that ‘My God, what do I do now?’ way.  I have a few more smart people in my corner and a new perspective and fresh ideas to dig into my rewrite.

Thank you all.

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Corey, Mary, Sabrina, Chloe
and some photobombing hippie in the back

Speaking for myself, this is the 7th Black List screenwriters lab I’ve been involved with, and each has had its own unique feel. This group – Chloe, Corey, Mary and Sabrina – exhibited the very best in writer qualities: talent, passion, curiosity, flexibility, honesty, commitment, openness, and most of all creativity. As with all of our labs, both Franklin and I emphasize the value of them continuing on as a writers group. I have no doubt this quartet will follow through on that.

The next Black List mini-lab is scheduled for February 18-19, 2016 in NYC at Barnard College as part of the Athena Film Festival. There are plans for other Black List screenwriter labs next year, so be on the lookout for them.

For more information about Black List workshops, go here.

Go Into The Story Black List Writer Interviews

August 31st, 2015 by

In the month of August, I have been featuring insights on the craft from Black List writers I have interviewed over the years. That inspired me to complete something I’ve wanted to do for a long time: Aggregate links to all of the Black List interviews I have done.

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Here they are:

Arash Amel (2011, 2014 Black List)

Nikole Beckwith (2012 Black List)

Roberto Bentivegna (2012 Black List)

Carter Blanchard (2012 Black List)

Christopher Borrelli (2009 Black List)

Elijah Bynum (2013 Black List)

Damien Chazelle (2010, 2012 Black List)

Spenser Cohen (2013 Black List)

James DiLapo (2012 Black List)

Geoff LaTulippe (2008 Black List)

Brian Duffield (2010, 2011, 2014 Black List)

Stephany Folsom (2013 Black List)

F. Scott Frazier (2011, 2014 Black List)

Jeremiah Friedman and Nick Palmer (2010 Black List)

Joshua Golden (2014 Black List)

David Guggenheim (2010, 2012 Black List)

Julia Hart (2012 Black List)

Eric Heisserer (2012, 2014 Black List)

Jason Mark Hellerman (2013 Black List)

Brad Ingelsby (2008, 2012 Black List)

Rajiv Joseph and Scott Rothman (2012 Black List)

Lisa Joy (2013 Black List)

Kyle Killen (2008 Black List)

Eric Koenig (2014 Black List)

Justin Kremer (2012, 2014 Black List)

Daniel Kunka (2014 Black List)

Seth Lochhead (2006 Black List)

Kelly Marcel (2011 Black List)

Donald Margulies (2013 Black List)

Chris McCoy (2007, 2009, 2011 Black List)

Jeff Morris (2009 Black List)

Scott Neustadter and Michael H. Weber (2005, 2006, 2008, 2009, 2012 Black List)

Declan O’Dwyer (2013 Black List)

Ashley Powell (2012 Black List)

Chris Roessner (2012 Black List)

Stephanie Shannon (2013 Black List)

Will Simmons (2012 Black List)

Chris Sparling (2009, 2010, 2013 Black List)

Barbara Stepansky (2013 Black List)

Michael Werwie (2012 Black List)

Gary Whitta (2007 Black List)

I consider interviews to be the equivalent of primary source material. In other words, when you read interviews with writers such as these, you are getting information from people who are on the front lines of the movie and TV business.

Interviews with over 40 Black List writers. You should read them. Who knows you may gleam some key insight which could transform your approach to writing.

Black List writers on the craft: Theme (Part 2)

August 25th, 2015 by

Over the years, I have interviewed over 40 Black List screenwriters. This month, I am running a series featuring one topic per week related to the craft of writing.

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This week: How do you understand and work with the concept of ‘theme’?

The diversity of responses among the Black List writers I have interviewed is fascinating. Yesterday we explored various articulations of what ‘theme’ is. Today we look at some writers who begin the story-crafting process with theme.

Joshua Golden: “I typically start from theme and character. I don’t want to start writing and halfway through, ultimately figure out what the story is about. I mean thematically, what it’s about. I need to know that going in… I want everyone’s journey to be reflective of whatever the theme is. Some might argue that maybe it’s not as important or as necessary. But theme and character, for me, are my two starting points.”

Brian Duffield: “I almost always start with the theme. I can’t even really think of a situation where I didn’t (if it was an original). Usually it’s a theme I want to explore because it’s really locked into my head as a person, as something I’m going through or struggling or interested with, so even if I throw out the characters or genre surrounding that theme a dozen times, the theme stays intact because it’s an itch I need to scratch. I think theme is deathly important. I read a lot of scripts and watch a lot of movies where I couldn’t tell you what it was really saying beyond a couple of interesting characters doing something interesting. Which is fine sometimes, but it always feels a little surface level to me.”

Kelly Marcel: “I’m personally a big fan of knowing what your theme is before starting. I think they can arise as you tell the story, but writing within and for a theme seems to me to help the process along. It allows for much more intricate storytelling, ways of speaking to the theme and letting your theme to speak to you, even unconsciously. I said ‘theme’ four times in that last paragraph. I shouldn’t be allowed to be a writer.”

For some writers, whether they start with theme or not is an open question:

Barbara Stepansky: “It really depends on the script. Sometimes I have a very clear theme in mind and I know this is a story about these people discovering a certain aspect about life. Then every scene has to be geared toward that. Then sometimes, like with “Sugar in My Veins,” honestly no, I never spend much time on theme with “Sugar in My Veins.” I just wanted to tell this particular story and so it didn’t bother me that thematically, it wasn’t that clear in my head at the beginning. It became much clearer later on.”

And some may wonder about starting with theme, but it’s just not their thing:

Justin Kremer: “It’s interesting because some guys — like I listened to an interview with Steven Gaghan — he is someone I have in my Writers Rushmore — he operates very much from the theme first. Then he’ll draw his narrative from that. I think what I found to be most helpful is to find the arc and work on the character and then the theme will organically emerge. That’s been my experience.”

Takeaway:

* Knowing your theme is important in shaping the narrative, understanding the characters and their purpose in the story, and tying together every scene into an organic whole.

* If you start with theme, you have some company…

…But honestly, most writers I’ve interviewed, like Justin Kremer, discover their story themes in the process of working out and writing the story, seeing it “organically emerge.”

How about you? Do you start with theme?

For Part 1 of this week’s series with Black List writers, go here.

Come back tomorrow for more about this important subject: Theme.

Black List writers on the craft: Characters (Part 5)

August 21st, 2015 by

Over the years, I have interviewed over 40 Black List screenwriters. This month, I will run a series featuring one topic per week related to the craft of writing.

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This week: How do you develop your characters?

Reading through all of the responses was a fascinating exercise. Once again, this group of writers demonstrates there is no one way to approach the craft. Their respective approaches to developing their story’s characters vary from highly intuitive, even instinctual to the conscious use of specific techniques and writing exercises. In all cases, the goal is the same: To make the characters come alive in the writer’s imagination and onto the printed page.

On Monday, we featured writers who start their character development process by focusing on real people. Tuesday writers zeroed in on brainstorming and the importance of asking questions about and to characters. Wednesday we checked in with writers who use biographies as a tool for character development. Yesterday we explored how some Black List writers go about discovering a character’s voice. Today some insider tips on character development:

Carter Blanchard: “For me the story forms the character. Say you’re going to be stuck in a car for a thousand-mile drive with three people. You want the driver to be the world’s worst driver who refuses to give up the wheel. It makes the other two nervous throughout the trip. So that character starts to take on qualities based on that first situation you came up with, which is also a story point.  So as I pull the story together, the characters start coming to life and each informs the other.”

David Guggenheim: “For me, it either comes out of the concept — who is the most interesting person I could drop into this specific scenario or I first start with ‘what type of person interests me’ and build a story around them.”

Takeaway: The story or even the very concept can drive character.

Aaron Guzikowski: “I grew up mostly drawing, so I have to draw scenes from my head, and then I write them so it’s the same sort of thing with characters. I get a feeling for that they look like and get pictures of their life and try putting it together that way, kind of like a mental collage.”

Kelly Marcel: “I surround my computer with pictures of my characters. If they exist then I use the real people… If they don’t then I’ll find pictures of what I think they look like and do that instead. Once I have a face I can imagine all sorts of things onto it. Then sometimes I will find odd things in old junk stores and think “Oh, Ralph would have that.” So I’ll buy it and put it by the picture. I end up with a desk full of bits and pieces by the time I finish writing something– it’s chaos.”

Takeaway: Pictures of your characters, real or imagined, and physical objects can help to evoke characters.

Eric Heisserer: “I have a few standard tools. One is the table read. Once I have a draft that I feel is ready for eyes beyond my own, I gather a group of trusted friends together and assign them roles. I just listen to them read the script and see what they infer and what they don’t get from the characters. I find dialogue that works or doesn’t. We have discussion afterwards. That helps a lot, because you’re putting these words into someone’s mouth. You’re hearing how it sounds out loud. That helps immensely.”

F. Scott Frazier: “I typically like to read back the script in one sitting and make notes along the way. By the end of it, I’ll usually have a pretty good understanding of where the characters went wrong and where they can be strengthened.”

Takeaway: Hearing your character’s dialogue read aloud can steer you deeper into who they are, their personality, and how they express themselves.

Geoff LaTulippe: “I think one thing that’s focused on WAY too much is “likability”. Fuck likability. Give me someone who’s bleak and damaged and awful any day over someone who’s just happy and saves puppies. I don’t care if your character is likable – I only care if he or she or it is interesting and entertaining and engaging. That’s all that matters.”

Takeaway: Don’t be obsessed about creating sympathetic characters, but rather focus on making them compelling.

For Part 1 of this week’s series on character development, go here.

Part 2, here.

Part 3, here.

Part 4, here.

Next week, more reflections on the screenwriting craft from Black List writers.

Black List writers on the craft: Story Concepts (Part 3)

August 5th, 2015 by

Over the years, I have interviewed over 40 Black List screenwriters. This month, I will run a series featuring one topic per week related to the craft of writing.

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This week: How do you come up with story concepts?

This next group of answers reflects writers who source story ideas from the real world and in particular their own interaction with it:

F. Scott Frazier: “Mostly my story ideas come from the world around me.”

Justin Rhodes: “I don’t really come up with ideas so much as I come across some bit of information that triggers an idea. It could be a conversation, something I read, or even something that happens to me in my daily life.”

Joshua Golden: “There are just little moments and little things that kind of jump out at you. Having worked with kids for so long, I think it helps also because I’ve gotten little ideas just from conversations I’ve had with them… I want to tell stories that remind me of the things that I loved growing up.”

Carter Blanchard: “I listen to people talking about life when I’m out… like hiking Runyon Canyon when you hear someone bitching about their relationship or something.  Little seeds can come out of overhearing people. Even if it doesn’t launch an idea for you, it can launch or shape a character.”

Kelly Marcel: “They just come into my head. Normally triggered by something I see or read or something someone says. A lot of ideas spring up from things that have happened in my life.”

Geoff LaTulippe: “I pull from real life a lot. The Everyday is an limitless well from which to draw inspiration. For me, anyway. So if something funny or scary or interesting happens to me, the first thing I think is, ‘Can I turn that into a script?’ Which I think makes me kind of a concept whore, but I’m okay with that.”

This line of thinking reminds me of an interview I read with legendary blues musician Willie Dixon:

How often do you write songs?

Well, whenever the various facts come to your mind that you think are interesting, it can do somebody some good.

Where do you get those facts?

From life. Life itself is a fact.

From life. Life itself is a fact. That’s what these writers above are suggesting: Whatever ‘facts’ they need to inspire stories exist in the world around them. Overheard conversations. Observed interactions. Little moments. But the key is to be aware of those ‘facts’. They have to register in your consciousness as a possible story idea. Like Geoff LaTulippe says after an idea hits you ask, “Can I turn that into a script?”

Maybe you can. Maybe you can’t. If the latter, no problem. Because for writers, the fact of life is there are stories all around us in the real world.

How about you? Do you look to experiences you have interacting with the world as inspiration for story ideas? Have you written stories based on such experiences? If so, please stop by comments and share with us.

For Part 1 of the series on story concepts, go here.

Part 2, go here.

Tomorrow and for the rest of this week, we will learn how other Black List writers I have interviewed generate story concepts and the variety of ways they engage in that practice.

Interview: Kelly Marcel

February 22nd, 2015 by

With the enormous opening weekend box office success of Fifty Shades of Grey, I thought it would be a good idea to reprise my December 2013 interview with that movie’s screenwriter Kelly Marcel.

London-based writer Kelly Marcel wrote the 2011 Black List screenplay Saving Mr. Banks which was produced starring Emma Thompson, Tom Hanks, Colin Farrell, and Paul Giamatti. She is involved writing several other high profile movie projects including The Little Mermaid and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Here are links to the six installments of the entire interview:

Part 1: “Working in that video store was my education. Nothing is going to teach you structure like watching endless movies and TV shows. Seeing what’s good and why it’s good. Seeing what doesn’t work and figuring out why it doesn’t.”

Part 2: “I loved the idea that this sweet film, this huge part of all of our childhoods, was born out of terrible tragedy. I was taken with the idea of redemption and the effect that our parents can have on us all the way into adulthood.”

Part 3: “I loved it, I wanted to write it, and that was that. It was only afterwards that I thought: ‘Oh fuckitty shitballs! This ain’t EVER getting made.'”

Part 4: “It cannot be said enough that no matter how good anyone thinks a script is, if you don’t have the right director -­- a person who will love it and own it as much as you have up to this point -­- then you are completely screwed.”

Part 5: “I wrote everything I wanted to say, it ran to 17 pages or more and then I cut it down and then I threw it all away and then I started again.”

Part 6: “I’m personally a big fan of knowing what your theme is before starting. I think they can arise as you tell the story, but writing within and for a theme seems to me to help the process along.”

Kelly is repped by WME.

Twitter: @MissMarcel.

Interview (Part 6): Kelly Marcel

February 21st, 2015 by

With the enormous opening weekend box office success of Fifty Shades of Grey, I thought it would be a good idea to reprise my December 2013 interview with that movie’s screenwriter Kelly Marcel.

London-based writer Kelly Marcel wrote the 2011 Black List screenplay Saving Mr. Banks which was produced starring Emma Thompson, Tom Hanks, Colin Farrell, and Paul Giamatti. She is involved writing several other high profile movie projects including The Little Mermaid and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Today in Part 6, Kelly provides her take on several aspects of the screenwriting craft:

Scott: Some craft questions. How do you come up with story ideas?

Kelly: I don’t know. Hmmm. Good question. They just come into my head. Normally triggered by something I see or read or something someone says. A lot of ideas spring up from things that have happened in my life. In fact, I want to write about an experience I had at the Austin Film Festival. Maybe you’ll be in it!

Scott: How much time do you spend in prep–writing (i.e., brainstorming, character development, plotting, research, outlining)? Which of the aspects of prep do you tend to devote the most time and focus to?

Kelly: Research. That’s it. Much to some people’s chagrin, I don’t outline, and it drives them nutso. But I don’t. I cause myself a lot more work by doing it the way I do it, but I often let the story tell me what it’s going to do. I am sort of coming round to the idea that outlining might be helpful, and I think I may have to do it on one of my next projects because I am going to write it with someone else and they are a stickler for outlines (because they are boring and anally retentive), but yeah, I’m gonna cave.

Did I answer the question? Which aspects do I—- yeah, research? Oh and making playlists! And finding pictures/objects but I’m about to into that below.

Scott: How do you go about developing your characters? Any specific tips or tools you find yourself using regularly?

Kelly: With Banks I was lucky in that they pre–existed, so they were kind of drawn out for me. I surround my computer with pictures of my characters. If they exist then I use the real people — Walt, PL, Richard. If they don’t then I’ll find pictures of what I think they look like and do that instead. Once I have a face I can imagine all sorts of things onto it. Then sometimes I will find odd things in old junk stores and think “Oh, Ralph would have that.” So I’ll buy it and put it by the picture. I end up with a desk full of bits and pieces by the time I finish writing something– it’s chaos.

Scott: What about dialogue? How do you go about finding your characters’ voices? How can a writer develop their ability writing dialogue?

Kelly: Say the words. Say them out loud. Do they sound like a real person speaking? Yes? Now speak them again, do they sound like the character talking? Would this person use that word? Would that person lose the ends of their sentences? Nobody has the same cadence or tone. I don’t say ‘awesome’ the way Walt would say awesome. PL would never say awesome. Be true to the voice. Was the person brought up in a hot climate? Then they probably speak slowly, conservatively, in a drawn out way. What words sound good when drawn out like that? Dialogue and not having it feel like it’s you talking is hard. When working on 50, E L James used to say to me all the time ‘I can hear you saying that!’ and she was right. Trying to divorce oneself from one’s own way of speaking is hard, but I think that’s the most important ability to hone.

Scott: How would you define theme? How important is it? Do you start with themes or do they arise in the context of developing and writing the story?

Kelly: I’m personally a big fan of knowing what your theme is before starting. I think they can arise as you tell the story, but writing within and for a theme seems to me to help the process along. It allows for much more intricate storytelling, ways of speaking to the theme and letting your theme to speak to you, even unconsciously.

I said ‘theme’ four times in that last paragraph. I shouldn’t be allowed to be a writer.

Scott: What do you think about when writing a scene? What are your goals?

Kelly: Mainly lunch. Then dinner. Then bed. Bed is always my goal.

Every scene has to be doing something. It has to be moving the story along, peeling off a layer of the onion so to speak.

The goal in its simplest form is to be further along in the story, to know more, to understand something better at the end of the scene than when you started. If your scene isn’t doing any of that, then it’s just there because it’s pretty. Cut it.

Scott: What keys do you have to write entertaining scene description?

Kelly: House keys, garage keys, car keys.

Or qwertyuiop and all those fiddly ones underneath. Seriously?

Write it short, then halve what you wrote, then halve it again.

Brian Duffield is incredible at scene description. “Jane Got a Gun” is a master class in how to do it beautifully, effectively and economically. When anyone asks me about prose in a screenplay, I point them at that script.

Scott: When you finish a first draft, you are faced with the inevitable rewriting process. Are there some keys you have to rewriting your scripts and if so what are they?

Kelly: I actually prefer re-writing. The first draft is always this crazy messy bastard (because I don’t outline), and my favourite part is going through and slashing that bastard to pieces.

Perhaps I should have asked if I could swear in this thing before I started writing. Too late now!

Yeah. Rewriting. Great fun. Be harsh with yourself, do you really really need that line? That scene? There were a couple of scenes in SMB that I knew had to go because they truly weren’t needed but I hung on to them and hung on to them until JLH literally had to pry them from my clenched fists. He was right and never once have I thought about them or missed them whilst watching the movie.

Scott: What is your actual writing process?

Kelly: I have been prescribed a new writing process. It used to be — don’t do anything until it’s nearly deadline time, then panic and write as fast as you can. Now, I am supposed to write 3 hours a day, doesn’t matter which three hours, just three hours whenever. So far I’ve managed to make some really nice dishes from this really good cookbook, gone for some great walks with my dog and I’ve had a manicure. So yeah. I guess I am not a process person.

I write at home.

I sometimes listen to music (I always have a playlist for every film I write), depends on scene.

I am constantly hopped up on caffeine. What is your single best excuse not to write?

I don’t feel like it. I’m no good at it. The dog needs walking. Cake.

Scott: What do you love most about writing?

Kelly: FADE OUT. That’s what I love most about writing.

Scott: Where do you see yourself in 5-10 years? In an ideal word, what are you doing?

Kelly: Oh bloody hell! I don’t know! Erm…raising llamas on a farm somewhere? Running a company that gives away free monkeys? Wearing an Elvis jumpsuit all day? All I know is that I hope I’m no longer a virgin.

Scott: Finally what advice can you offer to aspiring screenwriters about the learning the craft and breaking into Hollywood?

Kelly: Listen to John August and Craig Mazin’s Scriptnotes podcast.
Read a lot then read more.
Watch everything.
Write a lot.
Join the Black List.
Make friends with other writers (they’re gonna tell you the truth).
Don’t shag celebrities, producers or directors.
Don’t become a hermit. Ideas don’t come to you when you sit around on your own.

For Part 1 of the interview, go here.

Part 2, here.

Part 3, here.

Part 4, here.

Part 5, here.

A nice feature on Kelly and Saving Mr. Banks in ScreenDaily here.

Kelly is repped by WME.

Twitter: @missmarcel

[Originally posted December 7, 2013]

Interview (Part 5): Kelly Marcel

February 20th, 2015 by

With the enormous opening weekend box office success of Fifty Shades of Grey, I thought it would be a good idea to reprise my December 2013 interview with that movie’s screenwriter Kelly Marcel.

London-based writer Kelly Marcel wrote the 2011 Black List screenplay Saving Mr. Banks which was produced starring Emma Thompson, Tom Hanks, Colin Farrell, and Paul Giamatti. She is involved writing several other high profile movie projects including The Little Mermaid and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Kelly and I engaged in a wide-ranging Q&A, the focus of which is her thought process in writing Saving Mr. Banks. You will find her responses insightful, frank and hugely entertaining. Today in Part 5, Kelly reflects on the psychological dimension of Saving Mr. Banks and some of her other movie projects including Fifty Shades of Grey:

Scott: Perhaps the central theme of the story is implied in the title itself: Saving Mr. Banks, referring to the father character in “Mary Poppins,” but symbolically representing Ginty’s father, who was also a banker. Could you touch on what is going on psychologically with regard to Pamela in relation to her father as she endures the script development process with Disney?

Kelly: Psychologically, she is struggling to let go. She associates her own father with Mr. Banks; she is breaking down and realizing that she has created a fiction of Travers that she now cannot bear to see as a character through anyone else’s eyes. He was everything to her, and so Mr. Banks is everything to her now. But Disney as Disney’s own salvation, his own homage to the father that had caused him such pain, has also adopted Mr. Banks, the character. It’s a fight over this one man. They’re battling over their legacies subconsciously, and neither one of them can bear to let Mr. Banks be what he needs to be, which is simply Jane and Michael’s father.

Scott: Walt Disney has to go through his own psychological journey in that over time, he comes to understand what “Mary Poppins” really means to Pamela, how it is tied to the redemption of her own father. In fact, at the movie’s most critical moment, Disney has a monologue in which he has to sway Pamela and he says about the proposed movie version of “Mary Poppins”:

In every movie house, all over the world, in the eyes and the hearts of my kids, and other kids and their mothers and fathers for generations to come, George Banks will be honored. George Banks will be redeemed. George Banks and all he stands for will be saved. Maybe not in life, but in imagination. Because that’s what we storytellers do. We restore order with imagination. We instill hope again and again and again.

Two things. First, given the fateful nature of this moment, how difficult was this monologue to write? Second, how much of that last point – “That’s what we storytellers do… restore order with imagination… instill hope again and again” – reflects your own attitude about your role as a writer?

Kelly: Writing Tom’s speech about his dad was very very tricky. How could I say the words that would allow PL to give up her precious creation? He had to be convincing, he had to tell her something that would unlock her. She had to know he understood.

Not that they would ever be pals, but that he knew. He knew how hard this thing was to do. That he felt her pain. I don’t know how that got done. The little boy in the snow was all I had; I knew I wanted to build it around that. It happened over a period of days. I wrote everything I wanted to say, it ran to 17 pages or more and then I cut it down and then I threw it all away and then I started again. One night, late, it just metamorphosed on the page. Talking about writing that speech is hard, because I don’t know how it came. It just unfolded from a mish mash of thoughts and half-sentences.

Scott: Here’s an off-the-wall observation: Compare Pamela to Clarice Starling in The Silence of the Lambs. Both were young girls ‘victimized’ by the traumatizing loss of a father, and the psychological point of their respective stories is to confront and deal with the unfinished business of those deaths. Clarice has to kill Buffalo Bill in order to ‘redeem’ her father’s death. Pamela has to allow the movie to go forward, as Walt Disney points out, to ‘redeem’ her father (via Mr. Banks). Again totally different genres and tone, and one story involves destruction at the end, while the other’s climax is about creation, yet the net effect (psychologically) is pretty much the same: Both Protagonists have in effect confronted, then moved through the pain of their past and can now have a ‘new’ life in the present.

Kelly: Woah! That’s deep! Yeah! Silence of the Lambs. It’s exactly that. I’m gonna take this analogy and run with it and tell everyone that that’s what I meant to do, that I totally saw that comparison from day one and you ain’t gonna tell no one you came up with ya hear? I’ma hurt you bad if you do.

Scott: Saving Mr. Banks soon will be rolling out in thousands of movie theaters across the United States and around the world. You wrote and rewrote the script, you’ve tracked the project’s development from pre-production through post, and now you’ve seen the movie and heard the crowds react. If you had to choose one word to describe what you’re feeling about the entire Saving Mr. Banks experience, what would that be?

Kelly: Grateful.

Scott: There are some other high profile projects you’re involved with including The Little Mermaid, based on the Hans Christian Anderson story with Joe Wright attached to direct. What’s the latest on that?

Kelly: Little Mermaid is still in progress. Joe is a genius and Working Title are wonderful people to work with so yeah, you know how long these things take to figure out. It’s still an ongoing project and one that is so bold it hurts my brains when they show me how they’re going to make it work. What I can say is that it’s a much darker take on it than we have seen before and it’s all live action.

Scott: Of course, I have to ask about Fifty Shades of Grey, which you were the first writer chosen to take on the adaptation of that hugely popular book. What were some of the biggest challenges you faced in writing that project?

Kelly: Well, it was quite difficult to write the sex stuff because I am a virgin, so I don’t know anything about what happens in the birds and bees department. Luckily some very nice people told me all about it. There’s some kissing and such and then someone sits on a rabbit or maybe it’s a duck, I don’t know but then you rub a bald man’s head and you either get pregnant or you get some flowers. So hopefully what I’ve written will ring true.

Scott: Do you have any plans to explore TV again or are you satisfied just now to work in feature films?

Kelly: I do I do! Get this! Westbridge came back around and we are finally getting to make it. The good ole BBC stepped up, and I start work with Tommy Schlamme – who I developed it with – next week. It’s so nice to be back working with him. We spent a lot of time together developing the pilot and took a trip to Texas to research it, so it feels like coming home to be able to rejoin him and his producing partner Julie.

Tomorrow in Part 6, Kelly provides her take on several aspects of the screenwriting craft.

For Part 1 of the interview, go here.

Part 2, here.

Part 3, here.

Part 4, here.

Kelly is repped by WME.

Twitter: @missmarcel

[Originally posted December 6, 2013]

Interview (Part 4): Kelly Marcel

February 19th, 2015 by

With the enormous opening weekend box office success of Fifty Shades of Grey, I thought it would be a good idea to reprise my December 2013 interview with that movie’s screenwriter Kelly Marcel.

London-based writer Kelly Marcel wrote the 2011 Black List screenplay Saving Mr. Banks which was produced starring Emma Thompson, Tom Hanks, Colin Farrell, and Paul Giamatti. She is involved writing several other high profile movie projects including The Little Mermaid and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Kelly and I engaged in a wide-ranging Q&A, the focus of which is her thought process in writing Saving Mr. Banks. You will find her responses insightful, frank and hugely entertaining. Today in Part 4, Kelly gets into the mechanics of handling the numerous time transitions in Saving Mr. Banks and how much fun it was to write dialogue for the Pamela Travers character:

Scott: Your script has lots of visual-­to-­visual transitions from present to past, past to present: Train to airplane; sunlight in LA to sunlight in London; Pamela on the balcony of the Beverly Hills Hotel, arms outstretched to Ginty on the porch of Allora, arms clamped around her body. How focused were you in the original script with those type of transitions or does that reflect working with a director? How mindful ought screenwriters be about scene transitions and in a sense directing and editing the movie on the page?

Kelly: Those transitions were all on the page. Here’s an example of what they looked like:

She throws open the balcony doors for fresh air and is 
greeted with dry arid heat, dust, dazzling sunlight-­‐-­‐

EXT. GOFF HOUSE -­‐  ALLORA – DAY

-­‐-­‐Arid heat, dazzling sunlight. Travers, Margaret and the 
children stand in a line at the top of a pathway.

I would often use the same words to go from one timeline to another. However, John Lee did something brilliant, which is very subtle and hardly anyone notices, but almost always we are seeing windows or curtains. He uses them like book jackets, in through one, out through the other. And I think this device helped us transition enormously. It’s all very well to put a bunch of words on a page to emit a feeling of seamlessness, but it is an entirely different thing for the filmmaker to execute it. I have to say that way the changeovers in the film work is entirely John’s doing. He got a flavor of what it was supposed to do from the script, but he and John Schwartzman (our DOP) were the ones who had the painful task of figuring out exactly what that looked like. We could never say it. We didn’t want to use tag lines to explain where we were each time, and so the pair of them had a big task in turning words on a page to a visual cue every time. They used the windows and subtle changes in contrast and color. I think what they did is beautiful, and they blew me away every time they came up with a means to inform us visually what could have become very clunky story telling.

There are myriad ways in which JLH used visuals in place of dialogue. One of his ideas, and the one I love the most, is when PL tells the Sherman brothers to un-­make up words that aren’t real. He had Jason Schwartzman hide the sheet music for Supercalifragilisticexpialidocious. It’s hilarious and says it all, and that’s why John Lee is John Lee and I’m the luckiest person in the world that I got him as the director. It cannot be said enough that no matter how good anyone thinks a script is, if you don’t have the right director -­- a person who will love it and own it as much as you have up to this point -­- then you are completely screwed.

Scott: When we meet Pamela, she has agreed to travel from her home in England to Hollywood to participate in meetings with the Disney creative team involved in adapting “Mary Poppins.” However Pamela is extremely reluctant to do this, only her dire need for money compelling her to make the deal. I’m wondering, too, is part of her hesitation tied to a fear that by delving into the story of “Mary Poppins” once again, she will be forced to revisit the painful past with her own father?

Kelly: No. I don’t think she is aware enough to know that she created this character as a shield from her own pain. I think it is as a result of being in a foreign country, jetlagged, alone, crazed and misunderstood that her past comes back to haunt her. This thing that she has created and poured her soul into is being dismantled and in the disassembly so too is she becoming undone.

Scott: Even though Pamela is a gruff, no-­nonsense character, one of her most entertaining qualities is a quick wit. For example, this exchange:

PAMELA: (to Dick) What is wrong with his leg?
DICK: He got shot.
PAMELA: Hardly surprising.

How much fun was it to capture and express Pamela’s sarcastic, biting voice?

Kelly: HA! She’s such a cow! I loved writing her. It’s wonderful to be able to say anything and do anything with a character and not worry that people will hate her because they bloody well should at certain moments. She’s the most fun I’ve ever had with a character.

Scott: Much of Pamela’s biting wit and at times vitriol emerges her script meetings with the Disney screenwriter and songwriters. I’m wondering if you had any special fun with those scenes seeing as you’ve doubtless had your share of script notes meetings?

Kelly: Indeed. I maayyyyyy have used personal experience in writing some of those scenes. I’m not a shutter upper in those kinds of meetings; I’d love to say that I am full of grace and decorum, but no.

Scott: There are so many wonderful grace notes in your script, for example a big stuffed Mickey Mouse doll which becomes a sort of barometer to visualize how Pamela is feeling toward the whole Disney project. Was this based on some anecdote you discovered in your research or did you create the doll out of whole cloth?

Kelly: The Mickey Mouse toy and his journey started with him just being on the bed when she comes into her hotel room and then, when looking for some softer moments, he became integral. His shining moment comes when she takes him to bed. God, this is gonna read a bit weird for the people who haven’t seen it. Yeah, she takes him to bed and falls in love with him and they get married and that’s when we realize she is a human and a mouse, just like all of us. You’re a human and a mouse right? Is this just me? I might have gone a bit mad at this point.

Mickey and Ralph are really the only friends that PL ever has.

Scott: One of the most charming characters in the story is Ralph, played by Paul Giamatti, who is Pamela’s limo driver when she is in Los Angeles. He demonstrates enormous patience with Pamela and they develop a special kinship. He comes off as a sort of mentor figure, his sunny disposition despite his own personal family challenges a positive influence on Pamela. Could you describe how you see Paul’s character in terms of his story function and why you included him?

Kelly: See above for the story of Paul’s character.

Tidbit: he is the only character in the film that didn’t exist in real life. Like Mary Poppins, he flew in through the window one day and saved the script.

Tomorrow in Part 5, Kelly reflects on the psychological dimension of Saving Mr. Banks and some of her other movie projects including Fifty Shades of Grey.

For Part 1 of the interview, go here.

Part 2, here.

Part 3, here.

A short piece in Variety featuring Kelly and Saving Mr. Banks actor Colin Farrell.

Kelly is repped by WME.

Twitter: @missmarcel

[Originally posted December 5, 2013]

Interview (Part 3): Kelly Marcel

February 18th, 2015 by

With the enormous opening weekend box office success of Fifty Shades of Grey, I thought it would be a good idea to reprise my December 2013 interview with that movie’s screenwriter Kelly Marcel.

London-based writer Kelly Marcel wrote the 2011 Black List screenplay Saving Mr. Banks which was produced starring Emma Thompson, Tom Hanks, Colin Farrell, and Paul Giamatti. She is involved writing several other high profile movie projects including The Little Mermaid and Fifty Shades of Grey.

Kelly and I engaged in a wide-ranging Q&A, the focus of which is her thought process in writing Saving Mr. Banks. You will find her responses insightful, frank and hugely entertaining. Today in Part 3, Kelly sheds light on some of the unconventional choices she made in writing Saving Mr. Banks:

Scott: The script [Saving Mr. Banks] is notable not only for the craft that went into writing it, but also many of its many creative choices which run counter to Hollywood’s conventional wisdom. For starters, the standard advice of agents or managers is for a writer to put out a spec script that can appeal to as many buyers as possible, yet Saving Mr. Banks is a story where there is only one potential buyer: Disney. No one else could touch a project that stars Walt Disney and features one of the company’s most beloved movies Marry Poppins. Could you describe your thought process in deciding to take on this project despite the extremely long odds against it ever getting sold, let alone produced?

Kelly: I was incredibly naïve. I never ever considered that it could only get made by Disney before or during writing it. I just wanted to do it. I loved it, I wanted to write it, and that was that. It was only afterwards that I thought: “Oh fuckitty shitballs! This ain’t EVER getting made. Oh well, it’s a nice sample. Onwards.”

Luckily, Disney had other ideas; they embraced the script and moved very quickly to buy it and make it. And that’s also when I stopped saying “fuckitty shitballs” because you can’t say that if you work for Disney.

Scott: Disney not only bought the script, they made the movie. Is it fair to look at Saving Mr. Banks as a testament for writers to pursue stories they’re truly passionate about, no matter the odds?

Kelly: 100 per cent. 100 million gazillion per cent. And a million gazillion doesn’t even exist but that’s how much I think writers should only pursue stories they are passionate about. I say this from experience. I say this as someone who has written things I am not fervent about and they are 100 million gazillion per cent SHIT.

Scott: Another thing: Saving Mr. Banks is a period piece, taking place between two time periods, 1906 and some five decades later. Conventional wisdom in Hollywood is that period pieces are both harder to sell to audiences and add costs to the budget due to costumes, sets, and so forth. Did the concern of writing a period piece ever cross your mind?

Kelly: Gosh. Is that so? I didn’t know that so, no. Oops, writing a period piece right now! Bugger. Oh well, don’t care! I’m all about making it as hard for myself as possible it seems.

Scott: One hears constantly in the halls of Hollywood: Create a sympathetic protagonist. Yet the Pamela Travers we meet and get to know in Act One seems to do pretty much all she can to put off people around her. Were you at all concerned when you were originally writing the script, you’d get this script note: Make Pamela more sympathetic? Did you ever receive that note?

Kelly: I never ever received that note during the writing of the script. Alison trusted me to let it unfold. However, I did have to give the note to myself. Not that I wanted PL to be more sympathetic but that I felt we needed to see a tiny shard of light, a sliver of humanity and that’s how Ralph came to be. He was a very very late addition to the script. I had finished the draft and it still didn’t feel right to me. Her core felt like it remained unseen. I needed someone to like her, and Ralph did and could, because he simply didn’t see her darkness, so overwhelmed with the darkness in his own life was he.

Scott: One of the dynamics that is so delicious in the story’s setup exists precisely because Pamela has such a stern, joyless persona and that is the expectation of her iceberg colliding with Disneyland, the Happiest Place on Earth, and its founder Walt Disney. How important was that dynamic to you in developing Pamela’s character and the story’s set-­‐up?

Kelly: I didn’t really think about the dynamic in that way. I don’t believe that the soul of Disney was the happiest place on Earth either. I was much more interested in the idea that these two people would eventually find out they were the same. They had just chosen different paths. Different ways of dealing with past pain and moving forward whilst still clutching onto it. Disney had clearly found the better, healthier way, but both of them were defined by what happened to them in their formative years. They just couldn’t see it in each other until everything was on the line for both of them.

Scott: One other narrative element in Saving Mr. Banks that cuts against conventional wisdom: the use of flashbacks. In your script, you not only use flashbacks, you embrace them as an essential story device, by my count employed at least a dozen times. Could you delve into your rationale for framing the narrative cross-­‐cutting between these two timelines: The adult Pamela circa 1960 and the young girl Ginty in 1906?

Kelly: The upshot of the whole story depends on us knowing what happened to Pamela in her childhood. It could not be done any other way. The hard part of it was to make it feel like the flashbacks were part of a whole movie and not a singular film in their own right.

Pamela’s whole life was affected momentously by the death of Travers. She could not find a way to bring meaning to his demise. She couldn’t forgive herself for not saving him and so journeyed to another world to find relief. But even in creating a magical nanny, she could not find the closure she needed. We had to understand the smaller her so that we cared about the bigger her’s catharsis in the end. We had to earn it with her.

Scott: So in a way, there is a story within a story within a story: There is the overarching presence of “Mary Poppins” as written by Pamela Travers; the narrative of how that story went through script development at Disney; and the narrative of Pamela’s past focusing on the relationship of Ginty and her father, a creative but deeply troubled soul. What were some of the challenges you had as a writer in balancing all of those narratives?

Kelly: As above, it was very hard not to make it feel like all the stories were their own little tales. It was imperative that they spoke to one another. The challenge was in making sure the emphasis was never in one place for too long and that each timeline had its own merit. That each moving story part impact the next moving part and caused a domino effect, keeping the story moving forward at all times. It could never be still, until the monologue at the end. I was concerned that we would wish we were in another timeline when we were in the one at hand, that the Disney story didn’t overwhelm the Australia story and vice versa. Each had to keep us wanting more.

And yes, it was a total bugger to achieve. If anyone heard wailing and a head banging against a wall in a shed in a garden in Twickenham at that time, then it was most probably me.

Tomorrow in Part 4, Kelly gets into the mechanics of handling the numerous time transitions in Saving Mr. Banks and how much fun it was to write dialogue for the Pamela Travers character.

For Part 1 of the interview, go here.

Part 2, here.

Kelly is repped by WME.

Twitter: @missmarcel

[Originally posted December 4, 2013]