Write a Worthy Nemesis

May 6th, 2014 by

If the Protagonist is most often your story’s most important character, the Nemesis is not far behind. Indeed some of the greatest characters in film history have been Nemeses including Darth Vader (Star Wars: Episode IV — A New Hope), the Wicked Witch of the West (The Wizard of Oz), Nurse Ratched (One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest), and the shark (Jaws).

If conflict is the stuff of great drama, there is perhaps no conflict more compelling than that of a Protagonist versus a Nemesis. But what makes for a worthy Nemesis? How to develop them?

Following up on my recent Create a Compelling Protagonist course, I’m offering Create a Worthy Nemesis. It is a 1-week screenwriting course that takes a unique approach to developing this pivotal character in that the starting point is the Protagonist. Here are the 7 lecture titles:

Monday, May 12 — Lecture 1: Nemesis v. Antagonist

Tuesday, May 13 — Lecture 2: Shadow v. Light

Wednesday, May 14 — Lecture 3: Fear v. Need

Thursday, May 15 — Lecture 4: Disunity v. Unity

Friday, May 16 — Lecture 5: Overlord v. Underdog

Saturday, May 17 — Lecture 6: Intelligence v. Wisdom

Sunday, May 18 — Lecture 7: Empathy v. Sympathy

Notice the clever theme of v. for versus? There’s a reason for that, one you will discover when you take the class. In addition to the seven lectures that I am writing, there is 24/7 forum feedback, six insider tips, a teleconference, and an opportunity to workshop one of your story’s Nemesis characters.

The most recent Create a Compelling Protagonist session has been phenomenal. In fact, I have extended the class for at least another week because of all the incredible conversations we’ve had along with great workshopping of participants’ Protagonists. I fully expect the my Nemesis class will just as stimulating.

So sign up today right here and join me for a week’s journey into the dark side of the human soul, the place where great Nemeses figures dwell, waiting for you to find them.

Daily Dialogue theme next week: Nemesis

April 26th, 2014 by

Our Daily Dialogue theme next week: Nemesis, suggested by Alejandro.

Think of your favorite Bad Guys and Bad Gals, pick one of their favorite lines or sides of dialogue, and let’s have at it this week, folks!

The usual drill:

* Copy/paste dialogue from IMDB Quotes or some other transcript source.

* Copy/paste the URL of an accompanying video from YouTube or some other video source.

I’d also ask you to think about why the dialogue is notable. Is there anything about the dialogue which provides some takeaway re screenwriting?

Here is our lineup for upcoming Daily Dialogue themes:

May 6-May 12: Lying

May 13-May 19: Advice [Aarthi Ramanathan]

May 20-May 26: Robbery

May 27-June 2: Time Travel Talk [Bob_Reo_Inc]

June 3-June 9: Bad News

June 10-June 16: Flirting [SabinaGiado]

June 17-June 23: Happy Birthday

Hit Reply and see you in comments for your suggestions: Nemesis.

Spec Script Sale: “Nemesis”

November 14th, 2013 by

Warner Bros. acquires spec script “Nemesis” written by Christopher Wheeler. From Deadline:

I don’t recall ever writing a spec script deal story that includes setting someone to do a rewrite. But the Warner Bros deal includes the hiring of a new writer in Craig Rosenberg, the Australian writer who has the Takashi Shimizu -directed 7500 for CBS Films and The Quiet Ones for Lionsgate. How did this happen? Wheeler, the Australian writer who was known as “The Film Pope,” died four years ago at age 40 of natural causes. His script went dormant until Safehouse’s Joby Harold and Tory Tunnell met with Zareh Nalbandian and Jason Lust of Animal Logic and got it going again.

This speaks directly to The Spirit of the Spec: Write a story and put it out there. It can work for you… even if you’ve been deceased for four years.

By my count, this is the 79th spec script sale in 2013.

There were 89 spec script sales year-to-date in 2012.

Screenwriting Tip: Give your Nemesis a plausible world view

May 22nd, 2013 by

Here is a tip from my 1-week online class Write a Worthy Nemesis:

This tip is so simple, yet I constantly read scripts where the writer did not grasp the concept: Give your Nemesis a plausible world view.

Unless a Nemesis is a delusional psychotic, they will have a view of the world that makes sense to them. And frankly even a delusional psychotic will have a take on reality they believe, whether it’s God speaking to them through the neighbor’s dog or aliens invading through the water faucet. Maybe crazy to us, but sensible to them.

For non-psychotic Nemeses, by giving them a plausible world view, a writer humanizes the character. And as noted elsewhere, this brings the Nemesis closer to the reader because if we can understand what they see when they look at the universe, even if we disagree with it, we can share something of their humanity. That makes for a much more compelling Nemesis character.

In truth, it’s really more like this: Go into your character and discover their world view. They have one. It’s much more authentic to let them tell you what it is rather than laying one on them.

However you get there, determine what their world view is and let that inform all the choices you make as to the Nemesis character’s beliefs and behaviors.

This is one of 6 tips I provide in Write a Worthy Nemesis. Combined with 7 lectures [written by me], forum conversations and feedback, workshops where participants develop their Nemeses, and a 90-minute teleconference, it’s a great class. And there’s still time to join in with a terrific group of writers who are taking the course.

For more information, go here.

Write a Worthy Nemesis

May 14th, 2013 by

If the Protagonist is most often your story’s most important character, the Nemesis is not far behind. Indeed some of the greatest characters in film history have been Nemeses including Darth Vader (Star Wars: Episode IV — A New Hope), the Wicked Witch of the West (The Wizard of Oz), Nurse Ratched (One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest), and the shark (Jaws).

If conflict is the stuff of great drama, there is perhaps no conflict more compelling than that of a Protagonist versus a Nemesis. But what makes for a worthy Nemesis? How to develop them?

Following up on my recent Create a Compelling Protagonist course, I’m offering Create a Worthy Nemesis. It is a 1-week screenwriting course that takes a unique approach to developing this pivotal character in that the starting point is the Protagonist. Here are the 7 lecture titles:

Monday, May 20 — Lecture 1: Nemesis v. Antagonist

Tuesday, May 21 — Lecture 2: Shadow v. Light

Wednesday, May 22 — Lecture 3: Fear v. Need

Thursday, May 23 — Lecture 4: Disunity v. Unity

Friday, May 24 — Lecture 5: Overlord v. Underdog

Saturday, May 25 — Lecture 6: Intelligence v. Wisdom

Sunday, May 26 — Lecture 7: Empathy v. Sympathy

Notice the clever theme of v. for versus? There’s a reason for that, one you will discover when you take the class. In addition to the seven lectures that I am writing, there is 24/7 forum feedback, six insider tips, a teleconference, and an opportunity to workshop one of your story’s Nemesis characters.

So sign up today right here and join me for a week’s journey into the dark side of the human soul, the place where great Nemeses figures dwell, waiting for you to find them.

Screenwriting Tip: Character work as iceberg

May 9th, 2013 by

In the current 1-week online class I’m teaching — Create a Compelling Protagonist — we have had an incredible experience, more than two dozen writers from all around the world uploading literally hundreds of posts, providing feedback and suggestions for each participant as they workshop their Protagonists. The energy is phenomenal and the quality of the comments equally so.

A question has come up: How much character development is enough?

In theory, I don’t think you can do too much character development. I say this coming from a specific place: Most of the scripts I read that aren’t good enough suffer because the characters are too thinly drawn, not complex enough to be compelling or interesting.

But Scott, I’m writing a genre piece, not “War and Peace.” Do I really need to do that much character development?

Yes, I think you do. Your job is to make your characters lift up off the page and come alive in the imagination of a script reader. To do that, you have to know them in a deep, personal, and specific way.

Otherwise you run the risk of just trafficking in caricatures.

That said, you’re not going to put all of what you know about your characters in the script. Rather most of the background and insights you have about your characters will exist off-screen.

Think of character work like an iceberg:

Iceberg

What you see above the surface of the water? That is what emerges in your script through a character’s actions and dialogue.

What you see below the surface? That is the depth of what you learn about the character when you develop them.

Bios. Questionnaires. Monologues. Sit-downs. Interviews. Archetypes. Whatever tools and techniques you use to go into your characters.

That informs your understanding of your characters.

That enables you to hear their voice.

That brings them to life.

All that content below the surface provides the foundation of what emerges of each character in your script.

So as you develop your characters, especially when you wonder if the effort is worth it, remember this: Everything you learn about your characters is helping to create an iceberg of understanding. The 10% that appears in the script derives from and is supported by the 90% of the work you do to bring that character to life.

Want to up your chops at character development? On May 20, I will be offering the companion class to Create a Compelling Protagonist. It’s called Write a Worthy Nemesis and you can learn about it here. If it’s anything like this current session, it will be awesome! So join me for a great week of learning, writing and creativity!

Stories do not need a Nemesis character

January 31st, 2013 by

I’ve addressed this subject before, but since it came up yesterday in the Pixar and the Craft of Storytelling class, I thought it would be a good opportunity to review these ideas again. One of the class participants Patrick O’Toole posted this in the forums:

It’s amazing that both Nemo and Toy Story have obstacles but not traditional antagonist.

My response:

You can go here to read a transcript I did of Andrew Stanton’s TED Talk when he notes this about the earliest days of the company:

In the early days of Pixar, before we truly understood the invisible workings of story, we were simply a group of guys going on our gut, going on our instincts. And it’s interesting to see how that led us places that are actually pretty good. You have to understand that at this time in 1993, what was considered a successful animated picture Little Mermaid, Beauty and the Beast, Aladdin, Lion King. So when we pitched Toy Story to Tom Hanks for the first time, he walked in and said, “You don’t want me to sing, do you?” And I thought that epitomized perfectly what everybody thought animation had to be at the time.

But we really wanted to prove you could tell completely different stories in animation. We didn’t have any influence then, so we had a little secret list of rules that we kept to ourselves. They were:

  • No songs
  • No “I want” moment
  • No happy village
  • No love story
  • No villain

The irony is in the first year, our story was not working at all and Disney was panicking. So they privately got advice from a famous lyricist – who I won’t name – and he faxed them some suggestions. And we got a hold of that fax. And the fax said:

  • There should be songs
  • There should be an “I want” song
  • There should be a happy village song
  • There should be a love story
  • And there should be a villain

And thank goodness we were just too young, rebellious and contrairian at the time. That just gave us more determination to prove you could build a better story. A year after that, we did conquer it. And it just goes to prove storytelling has guidelines, not hard, fast rules.

No villain. And that can work. But not if there isn’t opposition!

One of the eight screenwriting principles I teach in my Core classes is this:

Character = Function.

So when we deal with a Nemesis / Antagonist character, what we really get when we boil them down to their core essence is opposition. They oppose the Protagonist.

But we can get away without having an actual Nemesis if we create a story that provides opposition for the Protagonist.

You mention Toy Story. That’s a classic example where the nemesis function gets passed around from character to character, situation to situation. I refer to that as masks, whereby a character may don a nemesis mask [or protagonist, attractor, mentor, trickster] from scene to scene. If Woody is the P, then at first Buzz is the N. Then Woody’s own jealousy of Buzz acts as the N which creates the circumstances by which Buzz gets knocked outside. Once Woody heads out to get Buzz, the circumstances they deal with including Pizza Planet provides opposition. Of course, Sid the ‘evil’ kid next door dons a nemesis mask. When Woody is trying to get on the moving van at the end, the other toys wear a nemesis mask.

And so yes, stories do not need a traditional Nemesis, however they do require opposition to the Protagonist.

This is yet another way in which using archetypes as part of the story-crafting process can open up the possibility of non-formulaic writing. Instead of a traditional villain, why not explore stories where the nemesis function gets passed along like a baton from character to character, situation to situation?

By the way, this Pixar class has almost 40 participants in it. A terrific group from all around the world. Online environments like that are an amazing way to dig into the theory and craft of screenwriting, and have a heck of a lot of fun in the process.

Create A Worthy Nemesis!

September 2nd, 2012 by

If the Protagonist is most often your story’s most important character, the Nemesis is not far behind. Indeed some of the greatest characters in film history have been Nemeses including Darth Vader (Star Wars: Episode IV — A New Hope), the Wicked Witch of the West (The Wizard of Oz), Nurse Ratched (One Flew Over the Cuckoo’s Nest), and the shark (Jaws).

If conflict is the stuff of great drama, there is perhaps no conflict more compelling than that of a Protagonist versus a Nemesis. But what makes for a worthy Nemesis? How to develop them?

Following up on my recent Create a Compelling Protagonist course, I’m offering my newest online class starting tomorrow: Create a Worthy Nemesis. It is a 1-week screenwriting course that takes a unique approach to developing this pivotal character. Here are the 7 lecture titles:

Monday, September 3 — Lecture 1: Nemesis v. Antagonist

Tuesday, September 4 — Lecture 2: Shadow v. Light

Wednesday, September 5 — Lecture 3: Fear v. Need

Thursday, September 6 — Lecture 4: Disunity v. Unity

Friday, September 7 — Lecture 5: Overlord v. Underdog

Saturday, September 8 — Lecture 6: Intelligence v. Wisdom

Sunday, September 9 — Lecture 7: Empathy v. Sympathy

Notice the clever theme of v. for versus? There’s a reason for that, one you will discover when you take the class. In addition to the seven lectures that I am writing, there is 24/7 forum feedback, a teleconference, and an opportunity to workshop one of your story’s Nemesis characters.

Also as a special treat, I will offer Log-A-Palooza, the chance for you to workshop one of your loglines, then submit your final version for review by none other than Max Millimeter: Hollywood Movie Producer Extraordinaire!

So sign up today right here and join me for a week’s journey into the dark side of the human soul, the place where great Nemeses figures dwell, waiting for you to find them.

NOTE: For those of you who entered a logline in The Quest initiative and have not claimed your free Core or Craft class, I have 3 of those slot left for the Nemesis class. I will give that complimentary class to the first people who email me requesting it. Or in lieu of taking the actual class, you may request a copy of the lectures. But remember: You must have submitted a logline for The Quest back in May to qualify for a complimentary Core or Craft class.

By the way, nearly 200 Quest entrants have taken a free Core or Craft class or received class lectures, so I’m working my way through the list, as promised. If you have yet to claim your ‘gift,’ you may go here to see what upcoming Core or Craft classes I will be teaching, and if you are interested in one of them for your free course or set of lectures, email me.

Humanize your Nemesis

April 26th, 2012 by

Yet another fascinating discussion in my current Character Development Keys class, this one about how to create a “worthy Nemesis.” An excerpt from what I posted today:

Frankly that’s one reason why I choose to call this archetype Nemesis rather than Antagonist. Here’s a quote from my Core III: Character class, Lecture 3: Nemesis:

The word “nemesis” has an interesting linguistic history: Nemesis, the ancient goddess of vengeance. Dictionary.com defines nemesis as “an opponent or rival whom a person cannot best or overcome.” And that is why I prefer Nemesis over the term antagonist. Whereas the latter is merely an “adversary,” a Nemesis represents someone who by definition holds the upper hand against the Protagonist.

By all rights, they should defeat the hero, thus immediately casting the Protagonist as an underdog — and this dynamic makes for a more interesting and compelling story.

“A worthy nemesis.” How many times have I heard that phrase tossed around in studio story meetings? Producers and execs know that without at least one strong oppositional character, someone working against the wants and needs of the Protagonist, it’s hard to generate tension and, therefore, drama.

One key I have found in doing this is to make the Nemesis a real flesh-and-blood type of character. However much time you spend digging into the Protagonist to find their humanity and core essence, you should spend an equivalent amount of time and energy with the Nemesis. In fact, one of the values of working with archetypes is it allows you to do an exercise whereby you switch Protagonists — that is you look at the story universe through each character’s eyes as if they are the story’s P. This is especially valuable for the Nemesis, a character some writers find difficulty writing because they are… well… bad. By looking at things through their eyes as the P, it’s much easier to humanize them.

When you humanize the Nemesis, that brings them closer emotionally to the script reader. And that creates a really interesting psychological dynamic where the reader now finds him/herself identifying even in a little way with the Bad Guy.

Here is a great little example: When Hannibal Lecter says he will help the FBI find Buffalo Bill, what is his request? He could say, “I want a naked baby to devour raw.” Ugh, right? Can’t relate to that. Instead, he says, “I want a view. I want to see trees. Water.” Everybody can relate to that. In that moment, we can, if we let ourselves, almost feel sorry for Lecter. And that creates a more multidimensional experience for the character and the reader in association with the character.

So a part of being a worthy opponent is all those things you list above, absolutely. But also the human element. Because in doing that, we make the Nemesis worthy of a reader’s attention due to our increased identification with him/her.

The Nemesis character is almost always hugely important to a story for multiple reasons, one of them being that they generally are involved in a relationship with a Protagonist that pivots on key existential questions: Who is the Protagonist? What is the nature of their soul? What is at the core of their being? Will they thrive or die emotionally, even spiritually?

To the degree we humanize the Nemesis, we make them that much more powerful as characters because they become more intriguing and compelling.

What is your favorite Nemesis character?

January 12th, 2012 by

Received this tweet from @khanb1:

Whats your fav nemesis archetype of all time? I want to know, what makes for a memorable nemesis? Someone we love to hate?

I thought that would make an excellent question for the GITS community. What is your favorite movie Nemesis?

To get this party started, here is the Top 50 Villains as selected by the American Film Institute.

1 Dr. Hannibal Lecter
(in THE SILENCE OF THE LAMBS)

2 Norman Bates
(in PSYCHO)

3 Darth Vader
(in THE EMPIRE STRIKES BACK)

4 The Wicked Witch of the West
(in THE WIZARD OF OZ)

5 Nurse Ratched
(in ONE FLEW OVER THE CUCKOO’S NEST)

6 Mr. Potter
(in IT’S A WONDERFUL LIFE)

7 Alex Forrest
(in FATAL ATTRACTION)

8 Phyllis Dietrichson
(in DOUBLE INDEMNITY)

9 Regan MacNeil
(in THE EXORCIST)

10 The Queen
(in SNOW WHITE AND THE SEVEN DWARFS)

11 Michael Corleone
(in THE GODFATHER: PART II)

12 Alex De Large
(in CLOCKWORK ORANGE)

13 HAL 9000
(in 2001: A SPACE ODYSSEY)

14 The Alien
(in ALIEN)

15 Amon Goeth
(in SCHINDLER’S LIST)

16 Noah Cross
(in CHINATOWN)

17 Annie Wilkes
(in MISERY)

18 The Shark
(in JAWS)

19 Captain Bligh
(in MUTINY ON THE BOUNTY)

20 Man
(in BAMBI)

21 Mrs. John Iselin
(in THE MANCHURIAN CANDIDATE)

22 Terminator
(in THE TERMINATOR)

23 Eve Harrington
(in ALL ABOUT EVE)

24 Gordon Gekko
(in WALL STREET)

25 Jack Torrance
(in THE SHINING)

26 Cody Jarrett
(in WHITE HEAT)

27 Martians
(in THE WAR OF THE WORLDS)

28 Max Cady
(in CAPE FEAR)

29 Reverend Harry Powell
(in THE NIGHT OF THE HUNTER)

30 Travis Bickle
(in TAXI DRIVER)

31 Mrs. Danvers
(in REBECCA)

32 Clyde Barrow & Bonnie Parker
(in BONNIE AND CLYDE)

33 Count Dracula
(in DRACULA)

34 Dr. Szell
(in MARATHON MAN)

35 J.J. Hunsecker
(in SWEET SMELL OF SUCCESS)

36 Frank Booth
(in BLUE VELVET)

37 Harry Lime
(in THE THIRD MAN)

38 Caesar Enrico Bandello
(in LITTLE CAESAR)

39 Cruella De Vil
(in ONE HUNDRED AND ONE DALMATIONS)

40 Freddy Krueger
(in A NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET)

41 Joan Crawford
(in MOMMIE DEAREST)

42 Tom Powers
(in THE PUBLIC ENEMY)

43 Regina Giddens
(in THE LITTLE FOXES)

44 Baby Jane Hudson
(in WHATEVER HAPPENED TO BABY JANE)

45 The Joker
(in BATMAN)

46 Hans Gruber
(in DIE HARD)

47 Tony Camonte
(in SCARFACE)

48 Verbal Kint
(in THE USUAL SUSPECTS)

49 Auric Goldfinger
(in GOLDFINGER)

50 Alonzo Harris
(in TRAINING DAY)

Obviously a lot of old white guys voted for this list. What about Agent Smith in The Matrix? Or T-1000 in Terminator 2? Tommy DeVito in Goodfellas? Jigsaw in Saw?

Besides several of the characters in the list above have other narrative functions in their respective movies. Verbal Kint is a Trickster. Travis Bickle is a Protagonist. Hannibal Lecter is a Mentor.

So perhaps we need a new list specifically tied to characters who actively oppose the movie’s Protagonists. What are your favorite Nemesis characters in movies?