2013 Black List Word Cloud Logline Challenge!
We did this last year and had a helluva lot of fun, so following in footsteps of Hollywood’s studios, it’s sequel time! Yes, it’s the 2013 Black List Word Cloud Logline Challenge!
Here is a word cloud based on the loglines for the 2013 Black List scripts, all 72 of them:
[You can see the entire 2013 Black List including loglines for the 72 scripts here.]
Your mission for the 2013 Black List Word Cloud Logline Challenge should you choose to accept: Come up with a logline using words from the word cloud. Or loglines (you may enter as many times as you want).
NOTE: One way your logline will be assessed is by how many words from the word cloud you use in your logline. If only one or two, less points. If five or six, more points.
BIG NOTE: Please CAPITALIZE each word cloud word in your logline.
Example: A RELUCTANT JOURNALIST INVESTIGATES a COLD DRUG only to UNCOVER that his FIANCE is a SNIPER for a MEXICAN MOVIE COMPANY.
That, my friends, is a truly crappy logline. However it gets across the key CAPITALIZATION point. This helps in judging each entry. Speaking of which, the inimitable Max Millimeter will return to select the winners, and you know what a hard ass he can be. His whole thing is about entertainment — “Get my [bleeping] attention!” — which you can read about here. So bear that in mind.
Oh, and when he talks about the six words test, he’s not saying make your loglines six words. What he means is can you reduce your story concept down to six words and if so, do those six words communicate a solid story and an entertaining one.
How’s this for prizes:
* 3 lucky winners: Free 1 script read + 1 month script hosting via the Black List website.
* 3 lucky winners: 1 free Craft class that I will be teaching next year through Screenwriting Master Class. There are 8 of them: Pixar and the Craft of Storytelling, Story Summaries: From Loglines to Beat Sheets, Handling Exposition, Character Introductions, Character Development Keys, Create a Compelling Protagonist, Write a Worthy Nemesis, and The Coen Brothers and the Craft of Storytelling. Each winner gets their choice of one class.
Deadline for entries: Midnight (Pacific), Friday, December 20th.
If you’d like to see some examples of previous Black List Word Cloud loglines, check out comments in this post.
More details about the contest:
(1) “How many loglines may I post?” You can submit as many as you’d like. That said, even in a fun challenge like this, you should focus on quality over quantity.
(2) “Since there are only about 100 words in the word cloud, there is bound to be overlap with loglines. How will you sort that out in terms judging?” Good question. And hopefully a good learning point for all of us, the difference between the logline for Dude, Where’s My Car? — “Two potheads wake up from a night of partying and can’t remember where they parked their car” — and The Hangover — Three groomsmen lose their about-to-be-wed buddy during their drunken misadventures, then must retrace their steps in order to find him”. The focus on a lost groom due for his wedding is substantially better as a comedic conceit than simply looking for a car.
(3) “What about people riffing off earlier loglines?” Another good point and I would think Max will tend to look more favorably on earlier loglines with similar iterations simply due to the earlier writer came up with the idea first.
But bottom line, let’s remember this is supposed to be a fun exercise. The opportunity to get a free script read, web hosting or Craft class with me is a nice treat, but hopefully won’t create any ill will on the part of folks who don’t get selected. Even if you don’t win, you will have exercised your creative muscles, and that’s a plus for you.
FINAL REMINDER: Please CAPITALIZE word cloud words you use in your LOGLINE!!!
Let’s have some creative fun! Good luck!
Visit The Black Board, the official online community of the Black List and Go Into The Story. Overseen by super moderator Shaula Evans flanked by a great group of other moderators, it is an incredible resource which sprung from this blog, very much in the spirit and tone of Go Into The Story and perhaps best of all, it’s free! They even have a logline workshop forum. Check it out!
UPDATE: It’s now midnight Pacific, so the challenge is hereby closed! We’ll all await Max Millimeter’s selections to determine the winners. Hopefully by Sunday night, but with Max, you never know. Thanks for all who took the time to enter. Hope you had some fun and worked your creative muscles as well!
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