2021 Zero Draft Thirty March Challenge: Story Prep — Index Cards!

Scott Myers
Go Into The Story
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6 min readFeb 24, 2021

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A series to help prepare writers for next month’s Zero Draft Thirty writing challenge.

Do you have a story you want to write? A feature length movie screenplay? An original TV pilot? A web series pilot? A novel? Short story? An epic length limerick?

The 2021 Zero Draft Thirty March Challenge is for you!

March 1: You type FADE IN / “Once upon a time…”
March 31: You type FADE OUT / “…They all lived happily ever after.”

It’s free! It’s fun! It’s Fade In to Fade Out!

For everything you need to know to join, click here.

To help prepare writers for the #ZD30SCRIPT Challenge, this week I am running a series on Story Prep.

Today: Index Cards!

These are index cards… or note cards, if you prefer. In a digital world, they are a decidedly analog thing. But for most screenwriters and TV writers, index cards are one of the most indispensable tools of the trade.

See this?

This is what a wall in a TV writers room may look like at any given time, cluttered with index cards.

Or this?

That’s Episode 51 of the TV series Breaking Bad all laid out nice and neat.

How can you use index cards?

  • Brainstorm: Any time you have an idea for a scene, beat, character, line of dialogue, theme, whatever, you jot it down on an index card, and tack it up on your wall. That way you have it somewhere so you won’t forget the idea.
  • Connections: More important, seeing all that story ‘stuff’ laid out in front of you can lead to interesting creative associations, kinda like what Carrie did in the TV series “Homeland”:

Saul looking at Carrie’s wall going all WFT?!?!

  • Plotting: This is where index cards can be really handy. Let’s say you write down every beat and every scene you can think of, one for each index card. If you’re writing a movie script, divide the cards into four piles: Act 1, Act 2A, Act 2B, Act 3. Sort the cards into what pile you feel like they might go in. Then work through each pile, scene by scene, trying to construct a linear flow. Some scenes will feel out of place, so you move them to another pile. Some scenes will feel useless, so you set them aside. There will be gaps from this scene to that, so you simply pick up an index card and write on it, “Need a bridge scene here,” put it into its place, and move on, eventually brainstorming the requisite scene. Then you put all the four piles together into one stack. Now go through that stack over and over and over again, telling the story so it flows one scene to the next. Then tack your story up onto the wall like this:

Or on a table like this:

The pros work like this.

Writers Christopher Markus and Stephen McFeely hard a work on ‘Avengers: Endgame’

I interviewed Academy Award winning screenwriter Dustin Lance Black (Milk) and he said this:

Then what I do is find the scenes that speak to that, and I put them on note cards. I have this table in my kitchen that’s of a certain size that I think is about two hours. And I start laying out these note cards and if they start to spill over the table, I know I’ve got to cut stuff. I keep doing and doing and doing it, going through it and through it and through it, combining things, telescoping time, combining characters if I have to until these cards fit on this table, then I think, will this collection of cards communicate the reason for this film? And hopefully do so in a dramatic and entertaining way.

In the spirit of Show It, Don’t Say It, go to 1:40 of this interview clip with Lance and see what he’s talking about… including the table!

  • Outline: Once you have your story sorted out, you can create an outline. Then you are ready to type FADE IN.

You will notice many writers use different color cards. Typically, that’s about tracking various subplots: White for the Plotline, blue for this subplot, yellow for that subplot, and so on. This is helpful because you can visually tell how you are cross-cutting between storylines which can help in terms of pace, transitions, etc.

I know some of you will chime in and suggest a variety of software programs that replicate index cards. If that works for you, fine. But at the risk of sounding like an old farting Luddite, allow me to praise the simple 3x5 inch index card.

It is tactile.

You can feel it in your hands.

You can cram tons of information on each card — dialogue, scene description, theme, questions, reminders, all in ink, your words, another tactile experience. You know, actual writing.

When you have your stack of cards, holding it in your lap, there’s actual heft to it, substance.

This is your story… and these cards represent it actually having come into being.

Then when you lay it out on a table or tack it up on a wall, you can step back in actual physical space and stare at it, let your eyes roam back and forth.

It’s not squished onto 14" computer monitor, little electronic bits of data.

Hell, no. It takes up a whole goddammed wall of paper, ink and tacks!

Again a tactile experience: It’s a story and it’s real!

The desk of mystery writer Harlan Thrombey from the movie ‘Knives Out’

Here’s to the humble index card, pawns in our creative chess game. But if we keep working them and working them until the story emerges into life, we can crown those pawns and turn them into queens.

And our story will rise to glory.

[Cue heroic soundtrack, writer weeps, audience cheers… and black].

Tomorrow: Another story prep tip.

Courtesy of Stephen Dudley

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Tomorrow, I’ll have another story prep tip.

Have you got your story concept ready to rock and roll in the 2021 Zero Draft Thirty March Challenge? Come back here every day in March to share the experience with a slew of other writers as you make your way to FADE OUT.

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Onward!

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