Script To Screen: “Traffic”

From the 2000 movie Traffic [screenplay by Stephen Gaghan, based on a miniseries by Simon Moore).

Setup: Javier Rodriguez [Benicio Del Toro] and his police partner Manolo are in trouble with a corrupt high-ranking Mexican official Salazar. Two of Salazar’s henchmen are driving Rodriguez and Manolo out into the desert…

INT. SUV - DAYWe're in the desert. There's nothing in any directions.Javi is implacable. Manolo understands what is happening.MANOLO
I was going to feed them wrong
information. Feed them lies to...
it was for...The men say nothing. After a beat --MANOLO
Don't tell Anna I died like this.
Tell her it was something else.
Tell her it was official business.
Tell her that I died doing something
honorable. Please, tell her that
for me...EXT. DESERT - DAYJavi and Manolo stand next to two freshly dug graves.MAN #1
Turn around.Javi hesitates before turning. We're on Javi as we hear the
GUNSHOT. Javi doesn't flinch. Manolo's body falls into the
grave.Javi stands there, waiting.MAN #1
You got anything you want to say?Javi shakes his head. Finally, another GUNSHOT. After a
beat, a hand reaches out of Javi's shoulder.MAN #1
Sorry about that... we had to be
sure.They walk back to the SUV.SOMEBODY ELSE
Are you sure you don't have anything
to tell us?Javi says nothing, doesn't even acknowledge them. We hear a
GUNSHOT.

Here is the movie version of the scene:

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