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Video: “Nuking the Fridge”

Scott Myers
Go Into The Story
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3 min readAug 20, 2022

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Another in the excellent screenwriting series Raising the Stakes.

Jonathan W. Stokes is a screenwriter with a unique credit to his name: Five of his original screenplays have been named to the annual Black List. That alone should get your attention, but there’s also this: Over the last few years, he has produced an excellent video series called Raising the Stakes.

In the Season One, Episode 3 video (“Nuking the Fridge”), Jonathan says this:

“I think a protagonist’s believability is inversely proportional to their kill count. The more people your hero kills, the less the audience believes the movie.”

Here is the video “Nuking the Fridge”:

Jonathon contrasts the violence of movies like Rambo, The Fast and the Furious, and TV series Cobra Kai with that of The Godfather:

“Michael Corleone, one of the toughest gangsters in cinematic history, is knocked out with a single punch. His jaw broken, Michael then spends the next year in Italy dabbing his nose with a handkerchief because of the damage to his sinuses. This level of consequence makes the movie’s violence feel real and high stakes… Compare this with movies where characters trade punches for five minutes straight.”

Jonathan isn’t slamming movies with unrealistic violence (he even says he’d like to write a F&F film). Rather, he’s making an important point about how a film’s approach to violence contributes to how believable the story universe is to the audience.

I would go even one step further: The more realistic the violence, the more we care about the characters. I’ve grown weary of superhero movies where the violence is so overblown, the stakes are often about the fate of the entire universe. Contrast that with a superb movie like Logan. In that story universe, the violence is gritty, raw, and real. People get hurt.

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