Jaws 2012–3D story notes
How embarrassing. Have you ever run across a writer online named Trypp Stryker? Apparently he had a notes meeting on the new Jaws sequel and was emailing some pages to The Bitter Script Reader, but accidentally sent them out to his whole email list. Here’s a couple of pages of his draft with studio notes:
I didn’t know if I should run this, but figured since it’s all over town, why not? Besides it’s good for GITS readers to see what actual studio notes look like.
UPDATE: I am admonished by The Bitter Script Reader after reading his post about the Stryker fiasco.